Hamburger Paragraph Planner
The hamburger organizer: a topic sentence bun, three detail fillings and a closing sentence bun.
A blanket-fort paragraph with six subject-verb mistakes, including compound subjects and -ing subjects.
“The subject and verb in a sentence have to match. This paragraph has 6 verbs that do not match. Fix each one.”
Printed on the sheet:
Have kids underline the subject and circle the verb in each sentence, then check that they match.
Revising and editing mixed up. Revising is the ideas; editing is the rules.
Trade paragraphs with a partner for a peer edit.
US Letter, prints well in black and white. Free for home and classroom use: print as many copies as you need.
The hamburger organizer: a topic sentence bun, three detail fillings and a closing sentence bun.
Four sets of detail sentences to match with their topic sentences, then a topic sentence to write.
Four short paragraphs, each with one off-topic sentence to find and cross out.
A beach-day paragraph with 12 mistakes to find with CUPS and proofreading marks, then copy correctly.
12 printable pages: six step-by-step lessons, a grid activity, draw-and-write sheets and teacher notes, sent with your welcome email. After that, new classroom printables by email.